Chapter 1: London, England 1517
I been alive for longer then most, 508 years a pretty good record, if you ask me. I was turned in 1517 on my 17 birthday, I was walking home and I saw a beautiful man walking alone in the streets his eyes were as black as the sky it was getting late and my father would be worried but as he walked away I said to my self,
“Father wants me to get married anyway and I like this fellow very much.” So I walked forwards to him.
“Hello kind sir!” I said in a sweet voice.
“So…Hungry.” He said in a painful voice.
“Well if you’re hungry, you can come to my house and eat there and meet my father.”
He stood up strait.
“Do you have brothers and sisters?” He said in treaded
“Yes, many.” I said excitedly
“Lets go then.” He said happily
We walked in the moonlight.
“My house.” I said as if introducing it.
I walked into the house the man not far behind me.
“Welcome to our loving home” My father said.
“Time to eat.” The man said.
“Yes, it is.” My father said.
“No, not food, you.” He said evilly.
He went for my father 1st. Then my brothers and sisters. And before he started feeding on me.
“Well, because you showed me this lovely meal I will not kill you, but turn you.” He said, his teeth digging into the skin on my neck. And that was the Last thing I remember about my past… But that was only the first night of what felt like the end but it was really just the beginning.

Chapter 2: 491 years later
(Beep, beep…) My alarm clock went of the first day at a new school, Forks High school. I didn’t want to go to school I’ve been going to school for over 300 years, what a drag. But today would be different, I could feel it

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Chapter 3: Syena Xana Tower
I walked into Forks High School… Eww… the smell of werewolf filled my noise,
“Well Kenshin better get used to it because from now on, it’s how it will smell every day. “ I though to myself. Some girl walked pass me the sweet smell of vampire filled my noise.
“Yes!” I said shouting to nobody. Well she came up to me she said her name was
“Syena Xana Tower” (Sorry anne for using your person) She said we could be friends. I said,
“Okay” Like a TOTLE moron.
“Bye” she said and walked away.

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I like the story, by the way, Kenshin Lillith

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